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Funny how looking back
Is more than staring at pictures

There were times you said you loved me
And I said I loved you too
Or some days, when I couldn’t lie,
I would say nothing at all
But there were also some times I would really mean it

And it is funny how
We never had a walk of our own
Sharing dreams,
Sharing hopes,
We might have been both hopeless,
Dreamless

You would say I was very dramatic
But that was only to cover the nightmare that I am
Funny how I changed this much but I’m still the same
Skies have never been this blue
But they were there all the while

And I do wonder if everything would have been better
Had I not met you
But doors are closed and all the windows are open
I am looking out
And I’ve never liked more
What I see

Even though I am alone
I have never felt as loved as this
And you say now
That you have hopes
And I do too,
But this time
I hope you are not hoping for me
©2008-2009 ~maluh13
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:icongatriel:
I love the simplicity of your poems and how you can just create so many emotions swell them up as you read through the poem and then just quell them as soon as your done, leaving you refreshed and even though it's a sad poem from time to time, you just can't help but smile. Please do keep writing

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Saanka
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i'm very happy you like my poems ^^, thanks!

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